my songs and poems

song #1 (no title)


when the hardest things in life
come your way
your scared to death
you hope and pray
to find the ray of sun
that youve been searching for
put on a smile its a brand new day
to find peace and love in brand new ways

the only way you can fail is if you dont try
dust off your wings, i know you can fly

you see the boy thats in your dreams
look at his smile its shines and gleams
you never thought you could ever have a chance
you never even got a second glance
walk up to him and things might change
your future might even rearrange

the only way you can fail is if you dont try
dust off your wings, i know you can fly

the girl you thought that you loved most
you hugged and kissed you were so close
then you find out that you were played
to her i guess you were just a faze
that night you cry cause youve been hurt
you cling to the smell of her favorite shirt
but now you know that she is just a flirt
she wants to talk
she knows its hard
to find your love in her deck of cards
you were just a pawn in her game
but your the one that ends up with the blame

the only way you can fail is if you dont try
dust off your wings, i kow you can fly
dust off your wings i know you can fly
fly, fly,fly
dust off your wings and try,try to fly


whatcha think?

copywrited

Very good, much better than my songs

Maybe you should call it 'fly'? Lools

maybe
i was thinking about "i kow that you can fly"
idk yet

Sounds almost like one of those new style hymns
With some light, up-beat non-specific instrument and a whole bunch of people siginging it in unison

i also like the idea of fly as the name, it sounds good.

thanks but im fixing to make some changes

ok i changed it... now enjoy