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Post by tayy-ann on Mon 26 Jan 2009 - 16:44

song #1 (no title)


when the hardest things in life
come your way
your scared to death
you hope and pray
to find the ray of sun
that youve been searching for
put on a smile its a brand new day
to find peace and love in brand new ways

the only way you can fail is if you dont try
dust off your wings, i know you can fly

you see the boy thats in your dreams
look at his smile its shines and gleams
you never thought you could ever have a chance
you never even got a second glance
walk up to him and things might change
your future might even rearrange

the only way you can fail is if you dont try
dust off your wings, i know you can fly

the girl you thought that you loved most
you hugged and kissed you were so close
then you find out that you were played
to her i guess you were just a faze
that night you cry cause youve been hurt
you cling to the smell of her favorite shirt
but now you know that she is just a flirt
she wants to talk
she knows its hard
to find your love in her deck of cards
you were just a pawn in her game
but your the one that ends up with the blame

the only way you can fail is if you dont try
dust off your wings, i kow you can fly
dust off your wings i know you can fly
fly, fly,fly
dust off your wings and try,try to fly


whatcha think? confused

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Post by Eat-ham on Mon 26 Jan 2009 - 16:59

Very good, much better than my songs Very Happy

Maybe you should call it 'fly'? Lools Razz
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Post by tayy-ann on Mon 26 Jan 2009 - 17:14

maybe
i was thinking about "i kow that you can fly"
idk yet
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Post by neoraptor on Tue 27 Jan 2009 - 7:03

Sounds almost like one of those new style hymns
With some light, up-beat non-specific instrument and a whole bunch of people siginging it in unison

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Post by Ryu Cook on Tue 27 Jan 2009 - 14:53

i also like the idea of fly as the name, it sounds good.

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Re: my songs and poems

Post by tayy-ann on Thu 29 Jan 2009 - 16:20

thanks but im fixing to make some changes
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Post by tayy-ann on Thu 29 Jan 2009 - 16:23

ok i changed it... now enjoy
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